Five conversion leaks, ranked
A concise page audit showing what is unclear, weak, or slowing down the decision.
3 launch slotsGet the $29 rewrite
Conversion copy, fixed fast
Your landing page, rewritten to sell.
A focused conversion audit plus finished replacement copy in 24 hours. No calls. No 40-page deck. One page, fixed.
Get the $29 rewrite
$29 flat · one revision included
Sample rewrite
BEFORE → AFTERGeneric promise
“Revolutionize your workflow with our innovative platform.”
Specific outcome
“Cut weekly reporting from 3 hours to 15 minutes.”
Clear outcome. Concrete value. Less guessing.
1focused page
24hturnaround
1revision
$29flat price
The expensive part is often invisible
Your page may look fine. It may still be leaking buyers.
Visitors do not work to understand an offer. When the headline is vague, proof arrives late, or the next step feels risky, they leave.
FirstFold Fix turns “What does this mean?” into “This is for me.” You get the diagnosis and the replacement words in the same sprint.
What lands in your inbox
Useful copy—not homework.
Every recommendation comes with a replacement you can actually use.
Your core copy, rewritten
A finished hero, CTA, offer story, trust block, pricing section, and FAQ—ready to paste.
Three new hooks
Three sharp headline directions so you can test the angle, not just the wording.
One revision included
Send focused feedback once and I’ll tighten the copy without adding another invoice.
A very small process
Three steps. Zero meetings.
Send the page
Share your URL, ideal customer, and the one action you want visitors to take.
I find the friction
I audit the message, hierarchy, proof, objections, and calls to action.
Paste and publish
Within 24 hours, you receive a marked-up audit and polished replacement copy.
The difference in one glance
From polished-but-vague to easy to choose.
All-in-one analytics
Powerful insights for modern teams.
Our innovative platform helps you unlock the power of your data and make better decisions.
Learn moreReporting without the spreadsheet
Turn scattered metrics into a board-ready report in 15 minutes.
Connect your tools once. Get a clean weekly narrative your team can read, trust, and act on.
Build my first report →Want to see the thinking, not just the result?
View the full sampleRead a complete independent sample: five ranked leaks and implementation-ready replacement copy for a real public page.
Not ready to buy?
Let me find the first leak for free.
Send your page and I’ll email one high-impact conversion leak plus a replacement headline. If the direction helps, the complete first-screen treatment is still $29.
Good to know
Small scope. Clear finish line.
What kind of pages do you review?
SaaS, apps, productized services, newsletters, and small-business landing pages. One focused page per order.
Do you redesign or code the page?
No. This sprint fixes the positioning, structure, and words. Your output is implementation-ready copy, not a design file.
What does the 24-hour clock mean?
It begins when I have your page URL, target customer, and desired conversion action.
Can you work in Spanish?
Yes. Delivery is available in English or Spanish; tell me which language your customers use.
Launch offer · 3 slots
Make the first screen earn the second.
Send one landing page. Get a sharper argument, a clearer next step, and finished copy within 24 hours.
FirstFold Fix$29
- Prioritized conversion audit
- Full core-page rewrite
- Three headline directions
- One focused revision
In the PayPal note, include your page URL, ideal customer, desired action, and delivery language. The 24-hour clock starts when those details arrive.